Angus
I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, September 28, 2017
Best Day Ever!
Elephant was in the school grounds he crashed into a big tree and snapped it in half! Crash,crack,kapow! It hit the power lines and a massive fire was sparked ,it started to flame and William came to the rescue.
William used his wheelchair and water sprayed all over the fire. The fire destroyed the whole playground, it travelled across the school. Fire engines arrived and sprayed the water everywhere, people were running out of school to get away from the fire.
A Unicorn came and tried to eat every one
and their lunchbox! They jumped on the Unicorn and flew Over the rainbow.
The rainbow led to a pot of gold and they gave Miss Sutherland $10 000!!!
The end!!
Tuesday, August 29, 2017
THE RACE
His heart was pounding as they flew over the crest of the hill.
He could taste the gritty dirt that had blown underneath his helmet, and the trickle of sweat that poured down in his neck.
The roar of the engines filled his ears, and he fixed his eyes on the next jump; this was his chance to shine…
I was waiting at the start line, I felt nervous and sweat was dripping down my face.
The gun went bang the race started, there bikes were going everywhere they were making such a huge noise.
They wore special helmets so no dust does not come in.
They raced off he was winning but then he hit a bump he fall off his bike he was injured really badly on the leg but he got back up and then won.
By angus
Wednesday, May 24, 2017
Wednesday, May 17, 2017
my Learning Conference
This is my learning conference.Could you please take the time to look at my learning conference and look at my next steps for reading writing and maths
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Learning.
Wednesday, April 12, 2017
About ME
My name is Angus and I am 8 years old. I go to Yaldhurst Model School and I am a year 4, I am in Te Mahuri. Things I like to do: I like to play on my motor bike and I like to ride my scooter.
I also like to go to the bmx track with my Dad and I LOVE the skate park, I do tricks on my scooter.
Thank you for reading my first blog post.
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